My writing

I think that a pay close attention to the detail in my writing, and really use it well. I think i express well (I mean they had a while to find the problem. It makes you wounder what is more important, your children or their money. Why not find the problem and fix it? I guess a couple times its by mistake but when you look at all the toys that where recalled you can no longer look at it that way.(from recalled toys). I think i also use a lot of metaphors for expression and to help people understand that point that I was trying to make ( Teens the have bubbles like no other kind, we stay wrapped up in,girls/guys, hanging out, and the next best thing. (from don't for get to smell the flowers). I think because I use writing as my way of expression Its become easy for me to write where it flows. Its wasn't always easy though I think I've had allot of practice and wonderful teachers to help me better express my self. but as far as grammar and all that goes its tossed out the window, I know thats not the best kinda thing but like I was told by my English teacher (in the 7th grade) thats why we have spell check. Not always the best thing to do,but, when expressing me there is nothing spell check can do!!