Ava 16
I think its really cool that she has started a blog. She seems like a cool person. But it seems that she will use her blog to vent about school, home life, and other teenage stuff. maybe it will be a good way to get things off her shoulders. her writing is kind of all over the place like she has so much to say but her mind is just working faster than her computer keys
Rin Reizei 14
She just writes about school and how its kinda hard for her to understand things. Like most young people write about just getting side tracked and venting about everything they feel. her writing is very hard to read it like she put words where she thought they should and she tends to write in a type of code.
Emile sings 15
Emile is not so much like the other 2 girls she has been writing about her moving to a new house and how she feels about it being Pink LOL! she has also posted pictures and has written about her hair cut. Her writing is very clear she seems like a person that types slow so it tends to be very easy to read and its cleaner that what you would expect most teenage girls blogs to look or sound like
Angrea 16
Topical teen age girl. The fist blog i read was about the hills.(LOL) shes totally into fashion and just the girly stuff. I think i would totally love to be friends with her she seems like she got a wonderful personality. From what I've read it sounds like she writes as if she were right next to you having a conversation :D
Mai Chou Vang 16
She's totally different from the other 4 girls who's blogs I've read. she write with heart and uses metaphors. her write style is very mature and she seems to be some one that will be a really good blog to follow! :D
I think its really cool that she has started a blog. She seems like a cool person. But it seems that she will use her blog to vent about school, home life, and other teenage stuff. maybe it will be a good way to get things off her shoulders. her writing is kind of all over the place like she has so much to say but her mind is just working faster than her computer keys
Rin Reizei 14
She just writes about school and how its kinda hard for her to understand things. Like most young people write about just getting side tracked and venting about everything they feel. her writing is very hard to read it like she put words where she thought they should and she tends to write in a type of code.
Emile sings 15
Emile is not so much like the other 2 girls she has been writing about her moving to a new house and how she feels about it being Pink LOL! she has also posted pictures and has written about her hair cut. Her writing is very clear she seems like a person that types slow so it tends to be very easy to read and its cleaner that what you would expect most teenage girls blogs to look or sound like
Angrea 16
Topical teen age girl. The fist blog i read was about the hills.(LOL) shes totally into fashion and just the girly stuff. I think i would totally love to be friends with her she seems like she got a wonderful personality. From what I've read it sounds like she writes as if she were right next to you having a conversation :D
Mai Chou Vang 16
She's totally different from the other 4 girls who's blogs I've read. she write with heart and uses metaphors. her write style is very mature and she seems to be some one that will be a really good blog to follow! :D
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Really sound observation of what they write and how they write. Well done!
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